Goals from last week:
David: write a chapter
Elizabeth: Get to the way station
David met his goal
Elizabeth did not.
Elizabeth needs to:
-- use adjectives and adverbs more sparingly
-- make grandma crazier / have a stronger voice herself
-- make my narrative voice more consistent
-- rewrite grandma scene
David needs to:
-- better explain why Bastian tries to save the girl (one sentence will probably do it)
-- change 'fishlips'
GOALS:
-- Plan three major plot points going forward
-- Draw out your character's route on the map
DAVID: Finish a chapter
ELIZABETH: revise and get Calliope to the waystation
David: write a chapter
Elizabeth: Get to the way station
David met his goal
Elizabeth did not.
Elizabeth needs to:
-- use adjectives and adverbs more sparingly
-- make grandma crazier / have a stronger voice herself
-- make my narrative voice more consistent
-- rewrite grandma scene
David needs to:
-- better explain why Bastian tries to save the girl (one sentence will probably do it)
-- change 'fishlips'
GOALS:
-- Plan three major plot points going forward
-- Draw out your character's route on the map
DAVID: Finish a chapter
ELIZABETH: revise and get Calliope to the waystation
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