Minutes 01 Feb 12

small talk: yet another good Christian girl (a particularly preachy one this time) gets knocked up...

David wrote 8 pages (5,000 words)
Elizabeth wrote 1 page

David needs to
 change the girls story
 edit and tighten up the exposition in the new chapter
 edit the porn sentence

Elizabeth needs to
 provide more backstory of the graveyard game so it is more obvious and the question is answered