small talk: yet another good Christian girl (a particularly preachy one this time) gets knocked up...
David wrote 8 pages (5,000 words)
Elizabeth wrote 1 page
David needs to
change the girls story
edit and tighten up the exposition in the new chapter
edit the porn sentence
Elizabeth needs to
provide more backstory of the graveyard game so it is more obvious and the question is answered
David wrote 8 pages (5,000 words)
Elizabeth wrote 1 page
David needs to
change the girls story
edit and tighten up the exposition in the new chapter
edit the porn sentence
Elizabeth needs to
provide more backstory of the graveyard game so it is more obvious and the question is answered
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